Heart affairs | (Office romance) - Reviews

sheesh i love this, probably a place in my top 3 favs on webnovel

Story seems ok but the stability of updates is just not there thwy bring privilege then stop updating with not so much a message saying why or anything

slow slow and  slow?I loved the character development of protagonist . I have read about 85 chapters and till chp 50 it is extremely slow story development but after that there is a blossoming of intrest in the story . I had to constantly think about should I drop it(bcoz slow development) or continue it because I don't want to regret to miss an interesting story, but........................ now times have changed I started to like even slow pace story ....... pretty contradictory,  I guess

Hm why do Chinese authors like to right Their  synapsis like some type of epic poem that tells the new reads nothing about the story other than it will be some type of epic tail to grandeur? In my opinion this is a very bad move being made by a good portion of Chinese author's. I don't know if this type synopsis works really well in China and thought surten parts of the East. But i am pretty sure it doesn't in the western part of the world and for most people who are natural  born English speakers. Most people in the west won't understand these types synapse. So my advice  to the people translating and editing these stories is if you notice the story your working on has one of these types of synapses would be To think about what the story's about write your own from what you understand of the story without  reveling to much. For example it needs mention main characters name and little bit about his life like were does he live and is he an underdog and if so how. I will stop at saying one last thing because i am onistly just tired typing in trying explain why this is bad for you the translators. Because no matter how  good the story might actually be if the synapsis suck it will fail to catch large portion of readers and will ultimately be beat  out by stories not as good in the ratings  but have more detailed synapsis.

It is a good read for relaxing and just enjoying the story of how silly the mc is and the misunderstandings the translation is just ok not really good but not the worst maybe because it is a trail read that they did not bother to really translate it that good after all they do not know if it really is picked so why bother that much with the translation maybe after it is picked the translation will go up who knows :D

I found reading this extremely satisfying and entertaining.No simp mc, not too overpowered mc, a somehow realistic mc. Just about right.For me personally, it's god level especially after going through trash to find something good.You have done good author, you deserve my fast paces and stones.The only thing that I hate about this novel is that, there isn't enough chapters to satisfy me.

The story itself shows lots of promise... The execution of the story is poor. Many opportunities for good storytelling go ignored or get glossed over. If this is taken as a rough draft and got rewritten it has the potential to be a really good story. Just not in the state that it's in.

Story outline is in point and i reLy libe the characteRs. The authoR has a really good imagination with thos one. wonder what new rad or twist to betwll

Story hasn't had time to develop, translation isn't good but it's not mtl like the others. Characters' appearances are mostly ignored outside of combat, the world is interestings there's plot being laid out. Though it plays into a lot of troupes if your looking for turn your brain off monkeyness this is legit very good. Just ignore the small details the author ignored and you'll have a fine time. I just can't in good faith want to read this, I like consistent characters, if someone fears death, better make it impactful if they are ready to sacrifice themselves. If a guy kills people for no reason, I'd expect him to not have morals. Maybe not insane but minimally a uncaring person. But then in most novels here, it's two dimensional characters that has a goal and morals that will never bend nor change. This probably will get good at 120 ish to being bad at mediocre.

This is an amazing book, with lots of detail, and has lots of  cliffhangers. It makes you want to continue. with the continuing of the chapters, the books gets more and more vibrant and alive. i actually felt like I was in this world. This is an amazing book, you should definitely read it.

I like the way you start your book and so far it seems like an interesting plot. One thing to take note of is to check the punctuations of some of your sentences. Some of them should be split up in smaller ones and others would need some commas. Aside from that, the writing quality is good. I can't say much else as you only have two chapters so far, but I'll keep on reading when you update more. Keep up the good work, author!

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